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miércoles, 29 de julio de 2009

Al irse el sol

Al irse el sol
El sol se ocultó en aquel atardecer. La luna era un enorme globo naranja. Hacía mucho calor. En el cielo no había estrellas., estaba todo oscuro. El suelo, que anteriormente albergaba pinos, álamos y rosales de todo tipo ahora era un manto de rocas rojas.
El muchacho caminaba por aquel sendero. Cada tanto se cruzaba con árboles muertos, esqueletos de animales. Le resultaba extraño ese paisaje. Jamás había estado en un lugar así. Sin embargo no se detenía,seguía caminando.
Al llegar a la ciudad se encontró con que esta ardía en llamas. Había explosiones, derrumbes de edificios. No entendía por que no aparecía ninguna persona ni se oían gritos o sirenas. Todo se hallaba en absoluta calma. Como si no hubiese nadie alli.
De pronto llegaron varias criaturas grises que poseian un cuerpo delgado en forma de cilindro. Los cuales contaban con brazos y piernas terminados en garras y una cabeza que albergaba dos enormes ojos rojos junto a una boca repleta de colmillos.Aceleró la marcha. Notó que le costaba moverse a la vez que aquellos le ganaban en velocidad.
Enseguida se vió rodeado y sin espacio como para poder escapar.Con voz ronca uno le dijo_ Dios les regaló este planeta para que lo cuidaran pero hicieron lo contrario. Contaminaron ríos, destruyeron bosques, se matan entre ustedes mismos. Por suerte hubo un glorioso día en el que, cansado de ver como lo traicionaban, se marchó a otra parte. Nadie sabe donde. Lo importante es que dejó este mundo a la deriva permitiendo que ahora venga a reemplazarlo este otro ser. Él es nuestro amo. Él logró salir de abajo de la tierra donde permaneció encerrado durante siglos para liberarnos a todos nosotros y acabar con la humanidad.
Luego todos se le fueron encima.
Fué en ese instante cuando se despertó sobresaltado de la cama. Abrió la ventana de su cuarto y vió que afuera la ciudad estaba como siempre. Con el sol que empezaba a asomarse entre los edificios junto a decenas de hombres y mujeres que esperaban el colectivo para ir a trabajar.
Al mirar el diario se quedó pensando en ese horrible sueño que tuvo. Sobre todo cuando leyó las noticias relacionadas con los derrames de petroleo, las muertes que dejan las guerras o las enfermedades producidas por la falta de agua potable o alimentos.

17 comentarios:

Carmen Rivero dijo...

Hola Gustavo, cuánta razón llevas en esta historia. Sigue así “pibe” me gusta como escribes. Me gusta mucho. ¿Cómo va ese frío? Por aquí con una ola de calor.
Cuídate mucho, ¿vale?
Besos

Sheep, Lucy & Bulma dijo...

No sé quién le dio este planeta a los humanos, ni cómo fue que se creyeron una especie de Dios, tampoco si "es el Diablo el que domina los hilos que nos mueven". Pero, mientras tanto, el afuera se sigue destruyendo. Es triste.

Beatriz Ruiz dijo...

Buenos días... paso a saludar recién llegada al blog de la mano de Gustavo...

Ciertamente Sheep... cómo es posible que nos hayamos creido una especie de Dios???... El ser humano, ya lo ha demostrado, el es el peor de los depredadores...

Saluditos...

Gustavo dijo...

Hola Carmen que tal. Si. Aca esta haciendo bastante frio. Hoy la temperatura maxima apenas llego a los diez grados. Pero peor creo que fue en 2007 cuando aca en Buenos Aires vimos nevar. Algo insolito que no se daba desde 1920 mas o menos. Te mando un abrazo y cuidate del calor. Mantenete a la sombra jaja. Chau

Gustavo dijo...

Como andan Sheep. Lucy y Bulma. Si... yo en parte a veces medio como que me creo lo del cuento. No por el diablo y los monstruos que relate. Pero si por lo de Dios. Quiza al ver como destruimos el planeta y nos matamos entre nosotros Dios no este mas aqui. Tal vez el mundo ande a la deriva y por algo esta como esta. Con cada vez mas gente viviendo en la pobreza, mas multimillonarios, pandemias como la gripe A, escases de agua dulce, etc.
Les mando un abrazo y que pasen buen fin de semana. Chau

Gustavo dijo...

Hola Beatriz Ruiz que tal. Ayer llene tu pagina con varios comentarios jaja. A veces me pregunto si el hombre no hubiese existido lo bien que andaria el mundo. Las selvas estarian intactas, todos los rios y mares limpios, no habria calentamiento global ni efecto invernadero. Tampoco habria animales en peligro de extincion, etc
Te mando un abrazo y gracias por visitar mi blog. Chau

Lao dijo...

Es así. El hombre es el mas destructor. La soberbia es su peor pecado. Cuando "cree que tiene todo" suele destruir lo que tiene a su alcance. Por ejemplo, cuando es bendecido con una nueva vida en su vientre, suele verlo como un problema, una amenaza, hasta llega a matar al bebé antes de que nazca. Eso es mucho mas terrible que matar ballenas ¿no? Un gran abrazo!!!

angel collado ruiz dijo...

Gustavo tienes un enorme potencial artistico. Busca canalizarlo, es cosa de ciertos toques y esfuerzo de tu parte, tienes la fibra de escritor y la juventud, aprovechala dejate llevar por esa inercia buena , tus escritos tienen valor. Desde el principio de concernos lo supe. Unete a un grupo y lanzate a fondo. Un abrazote, ya sabes no me iré con las manos vacias.Con tu permiso Angel

Gustavo dijo...

Hola Lao que tal. Eso depende. Si una mujer es violada tiene todo el derecho posible de abortar. Por que tiene que estar obligada a cuidar de un hijo que no quiso? Ademas eso es todo un tema. La iglesia òponiendose a ciertas practicas o a la educacion sexual es como que dificulta aun mas las cosas.
Te mando un abrazo y que estes bien. Chau

Gustavo dijo...

Que tal Angel Collado. En primer lugar gracias por los elogios. No se si debo ser tan buen escritor. Y eso de la edad mmmm... ya tengo 32 años. Ya no soy tan joven que digamos. Te mando un abrazo y gracias por visitar mi blog. Chau

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